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I did Stand Up Comedy, Feedback?

mchenrycruiser

Posted: 18 October 2012 03:13 PM

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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=i1jOHZw83BA

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mHWdJZHKrfU

lemme know what you guys think!

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angrychone

Posted: 17 December 2012 11:31 PM

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I thought you had some good material. My only suggestion is to not be so hard on yourself—opening with “I’m probably going to bomb” isn’t the best way to command the audience’s attention.

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